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Question by Brooke: What do you think of this writing?
I picked out this outfit because I felt in print-skirt-boot mood. I was wearing a skirt with a flower print with shades of purple and blue. I paired this with a sleeveless gray military vest. Under the skirt I wore black, sheer stockings. To top the whole outfit off, I wore my gray ankle boots. They looked like slouch boots that got cut off at the ankle. Tottaly cute. I was going to wear a gray slouch hat, but Adeline,my way too forgetful best friend, had borrowed it and had yet to give it back. So, I put my hair in a loose braid that I pushed around to my shoulder. I walked into the hallways of McClay High wincing, as usual. The sound was deafing and the PDA was appaling. I clutched the strap of my messenger bag, trying to lessen the load on my aching shoulder, a result of too much homework and useless information in a text book. I didn’t understand how people like Ruby Evan, resident princess, could have a little purse and nothing else. Not even the little dog I’m sure she owns would fit in there. After surviving the hallway, I got to my locker and like always Adeline was there, waiting.
“Heyy,” I said. Putting my history and algebra book in and taking out my science book. Adeline giggled. Her bright pink hair was put into loose pig tails, giving her a girlish look.
Adeline had a teenage life crisis around Christmas. I guess she got a really bad grade on this test and her whole goal in life is to go to Harvard and become a lawyer because her family puts tons of pressure on her and when they found out about this they flipped. Her dad got so mad he grounded her from sleeping in on the weekends! She was kinda crazy for awhile. I don’t know if it was the stress or the lack of sleep or what, but she wasn’t better untill he ungrounded her and Adeline slept over and then I took her to a day spa which was her Christmas present. That was around the time she died her hair pink and she didn’t buy the cheap kind, she bought the good kind that lasted a long time. It’s almost permanent. So now it’s September of the next year and her hair is still pink and she doesn’t even care. She loves it! She keeping up her roots.
“We’re gonna be late, Dodie. Let’s go,” Adeline pushed, beginning to walk. I followed her, finally matching her pace. We walked past Ruby, the girl who makes my life so much easier. NOT.
“Different people should really be in their own school. Don’t you think, girls?” she annoucned loud enough for the jainitor who was cleaning up barf in the bathroom somewhere to hear. I looked back at her, my face twisted in disgust. Adeline said something to me and turned around, with a faceful of Leon Gillman. My messenger bag fell on my foot.
“Ow! Shoot! Sorry. I was too insulted to notice my surroundings,” I said.
He laughed and picked up my messenger bag. “It’s okay. Don’t let her get to you. Here’s your bag. Geez, that’s heavy.”
“Thanks,” I said. Leon continued on.
“OH MY GOSH!!!” Adeline squealed. “He is sooo perfect for you Dodie!”
I rolled my eyes. Like I didn’t know. “C’mon. We’re gonna be late.”
I just want a som advice to use later on because I’m pretty young and want to grow as much as possible.

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Answer by Ada
Eh…Idk. Not good, but not exactly terrible either. 3/10.
To start a book describing someone’s outfit is a terrible idea. The writing style is weird. It’s almost like your rambling. Very amateur, but whatever. Keep writing, cause really, it’s the only way to get better. GL

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Question by Cat-Princess: what do you think of this poem?
I wrote it

Christmas is a time for gladness,
With eggnog filling lots of glasses.
The Christmas spirit you can see
For presents ‘re under the Christmas tree.

With all the stockings over flowing,
The fireplace is brightly glowing.
The hot chocolates steamin’, the marshmallows ‘re meltin’,
And the family’s inside merrily decoratin’.

Tinsel and lights twinkle away.
The sounds of bells remind us of sleighs.
The smell of ginger and pine
Help us reminisce the olden time.

After eating candies and cookies galore,
The children are ready to explore.
Snow on the ground crunches under their feet
While mom’s inside baking another good treat.

The children had lots of fun
Now that the day is all done.
They’re too excited and can’t fall asleep.
They’ve tried everything, from lying still to counting sheep.

The parents are putting up the last touches for Christmas,
While the children’s’ night is extremely restless.
The children don’t dream of sugarplums this night;
They’re too busy wondering what their presents will be like.

Would Santa Claus come again this year?
For the bells on his sleigh, you never could hear.
Not one of the children have ever seen that jolly old soul,
But their parents are good friends with him, or so they are told.

Christmas is such a beautiful day.
It’s the feeling of giving that makes it that way.
The gifts are all open, and the day is now done.
The best thing of all is that Santa DID come!
no its not plagerised lol, alot of ppl ask me that cuz they think my poems r so good

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Answer by A Stranger
I like it. Very nice specially the last one

Christmas is such a beautiful day.
It’s the feeling of giving that makes it that way.
The gifts are all open, and the day is now done.
The best thing of all is that Santa DID come!

Add something for snow and Jesus

What do you think? Answer below!

Buy Christmas Trees Online: Exceptional Packages and Savings This Holiday Time of Year

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Vantages of Buying Christmas Trees online

When you purchase Christmas trees online, you will get to relish the following Vantages:

▪ merchandise warrantee. on-line traders provide product warranty to their customers. Because man-made Christmas trees are set up in factories, one of them may have several shortcomings, although such example has been very minimum. Nevertheless, on-line dealers still make it a aim to tender their customers guarantee with their products.

▪ Free/discounted transport of the merchandise. Because on-line selling requires the delivery of the merchandise right to the threshold of the client, companies extend free sending depending on the location of the customer. If not free transportation, discounted shipping bucks will be provided.

▪ Ease of dealings. Because online buys don’t claim the customer to physically inspect the office of the company, one may transact with the company straight when one is in his/her sitting room. Moreover, payments can be made via electronic transactions. The entire transaction itself does not require filling out forms aside from the delivery acknowledge when the product comes at your home.

Christmas Tree in Story

Buying Christmas trees on-line is a merchandise of the continuing Story of man’s bond to Christmas trees as one of the main symbolisation of Christmas. When you bargain Christmas trees on-line, it is a step shorter to preserving the world’s woodsy lands from baring, which is the fateful end if the loose cutting of cone-bearing trees for Christmas trees had kept to the immediate.

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Where to buy Christmas Trees on-line

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Prelit Christmas Trees -Deciding A Great Tree This Holiday Season

Year after year, pre lit Christmas trees become more popular. There are plenty of benefits with having these kinds of trees and more people are using them. You can expect to have the following benefits if you go for artificial trees like this.

Expense

Buying an artificial Christmas tree allows you to save up on your hard earned dollars since you don’t need to buy a new one each year.

Reusable

Pre lit Christmas trees bring joy to the holiday season

Artificial trees are not only beautiful, they last long too. You no longer need to buy a new one for each time the holiday season comes. You just need to keep it in tip-top shape in storage and you still have a beautiful tree for the next year.

Convenience

This is probably one of the best benefits of having a pre lit Christmas tree. There are already pre-strung multi-colored bulbs in the tree. Thus, no more stress of having to look for the right Christmas lights to go along with your tree or untangling the strings of your old lights. All you need to do is switch it on and it should be up and running. Most trees are also built with a compact design, making storage quite easy.

Variety

Choosing is not a problem since you have different kinds of trees available depending on your specifics. Finding a small or big tree, or even a pine or fir tree is not a problem at all.

Safety

pre lit Christmas trees are also very safe. Real Christmas trees can be fire hazards so having artificial trees actually lessen the possibility of such dangerous things from happening in your home.

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Find the Perfect Gift for Your Man This Christmas

If you would like to get your man something he really wants this Christmas you will need to consider his style personality to make sure you choose a gift he really appreciates.

The Natural

The natural man is relaxed and casual. He feels uncomfortable in formal wear and even if he needs a smart look for work he won’t be excited by a new tie or handkerchiefs in his stocking. Instead go for a thick, comfortable sweater in a neutral colour especially if he’s an outdoors kind of guy. If he has outdoor hobbies a gift associated with these will also be gratefully received.  If he’s more of a couch potato a comfortable pair of brushed cotton lounge pants or pyjamas will be ideal for relaxing around the house over the festive season. A practical canvas “man-bag” is the perfect accessory present for your natural man.

The Romantic

The romantic man takes pride in his appearance and is in touch with his feminine side. If you buy him skin care or hair products he will use them (and it will stop him pinching yours!) The romantic man enjoys clothes so would appreciate a new shirt. He’s not afraid of colour or pattern so make it something unusual, modern and colourful but not loud and brash. Because his grooming is good he will also appreciate gifts such as a man’s manicure set in a leather case.

The Classic

This gentleman feels very at home in formal wear so a good quality traditional shirt and tie will suit him down to the ground. He will prefer a proper handkerchief so these will make a good stocking filler and he’ll be thrilled with a new pair of cufflinks to go with his double-cuffed shirts. Novelty or “jokey” types aren’t his cup of tea though so avoid these as they will quickly find their way to the back of his bedside drawer. He’ll have a favourite aftershave that you can buy him again and again.

The Dramatic

This man loves to be the centre of attention and enjoys anything that helps him achieve that! So the perfect present maybe an expensive, designer watch, a bright shirt or tie or funky socks (not for the office!) This man is usually excited by the latest gadgets so these make great presents for him to show off to his friends. He’s usually into fast cars but if that’s a bit beyond the budget why not get him a driving day gift experience.

The International

This man is smart and elegant, up-to-date and looks great in smart casual clothes. Fine knit cashmere is a favourite so a new sweater or scarf will go down well. A roll neck sweater or designer polo shirt for him to team with a suit will also be appreciated. Good quality leather accessories like a new briefcase, wallet or belt are great ideas for this guy. He’ll appreciate a modern fragrance of aftershave but get him to try a few and find out what he likes. Often a golfer, golfing accessories are an easy option.

The Creative

The creative man will have a very individual look and may be considered by some as eccentric! He may be into art or music so a present related to these would be most appropriate. Creatives often have collections so an addition to one of these could be a good choice too. If buying clothes for a creative man, make sure they are not high fashion which he may regard as “tacky” or run-of-the-mill which he might find boring. Try to find a retro piece of clothing or an interesting hat or scarf. You may find what you need at a craft fair, one-off boutique or even a charity shop.

Whatever your man’s style personality, a voucher for an image consultation with a style consultant could really help him make the most of his look and give him a boost for the New Year.

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